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March 27, 2006

[the great big Trek to Galactica] ^{11:49 PM}

So, being the nerd that I am, I'm painting away in my studio with the special edition of Star Trek Generations playing on Mr. iMac with the commentary on. Generations being written of course by Brannon Braga and Ron D. Moore. Moore went on to write and run the amazing revamp of Battlestar Galactica, while Braga went on to co-create and run the Lost in Space bore-fest Star Trek Voyager.

Two things become very evident with this commentary:

1. Branna Braga was probably the biggest proponet of the Voyager "reset" button, claiming that you can't shake up the status quo on a television show or else the audience will be lost. Moore, who would later make the term "status quo" forbidden on BSG is pretty quiet after this statement, which is probably the most polite thing he could think of doing.

2. The key plot points of BSG were in Moore's head for years, and if he couldn't make them work while Berman and Piller were in charge of TNG, he would get to them eventually.

It seems that Moore and Braga were approached in the 6th season of The Next Generation to begin working the 7th Trek feature. Standard logic dictates: new movie, new uniforms, new Enterprise, and it seems Moore wanted to set those gears in motion with a proposed 6th season finale involving the decommissiong of the Enterprise-D. He wanted the ship to be en route to Starfleet where it would be decommissioned and turned into a museum, with the crew scattered (BSG pilot mini-series anyone?). Moore's pitch for the season six cliffhanger also included plans to crash the saucer section of the Enterprise D on an alien world and strand the crew, perhaps accompanied with an enemy.

Michael Piller didn't buy the idea (and the television effects of 1993 would be hard-pressed to make it a reality), and the series went with the somewhat weak Hugh/Lore/Borg opus "Descent."

During rewrites of Generations, when the Enterprise-D saucer does indeed crash, Moore revisited his idea of stranded Starfleet officers, this time trapping them with a renegade Klingon crew lead by the Duras sisters. Since the death or Kirk was trying to defy expectations (i.e. becoming lame with him falling off a bridge), it became clear that the crash would need to become the big bang finale set-piece, and not a set-up for planetary strife.

Interesting how now we have a decommissioned museum ship flying around space and few thousand of humanity's survivors existing on New Caprica with their enemy keeping them reluctant company. Damn interesting.

FYI, as much as I loathed (LOATHED) the lameness of Kirk's death in Generations, the novelization version is much tighter and less cheesy. They didn't cut the Kirk death speech and it has more impact. The book has a couple of of really fun additions - Kirk's funeral in the past is a treat as are paragraphs dedicated to some of the series supporting characters (ie. Wesley and the Traveler discussing the Nexus' effects, etc.) As book adaptations of Star Trek movies go, this was one of my favorites.

Who's the nerd now?

Posted by: Kyle Curry at March 29, 2006 7:42 PM

I wanted to start out by saying I love this website! I don't know how you keep up on so much news, but the Star Trek world sure could use a pal like you.

Re Moore and BSG, I really wish they had listened to him instead of lame brain Rick Berman. Braga had his good moments and bad moments in trek so I don't really hate him, but Berman is someone that should have NEVER been involved in trek. I just don't get his way of thinking at all. Makes me think he was never a fan of the show, which is even more testimant to why he shouldn't have been the main man. Moore has done such an exceptional job on BSG. Every show leaves me dying for more. Trek used to be this way! Voyager sucked as previously mentioned, DS9 was fabulous, and Enterprise was a testimate to Bermans lack of understanding of trekdom. The fact that BSG is this damn good just during the first two years is a testimate to his skill. Most shows are ok and get really good after the 3rd or 4th year. I don't know what in the heck their going to do during season 3, but I sure as heck know October can't come soon enough.

Posted by: James Lytle at April 12, 2006 3:50 PM



	« due time \| Main \| cinematic sex acts » March 27, 2006 [the great big Trek to Galactica] ^{11:49 PM} So, being the nerd that I am, I'm painting away in my studio with the special edition of Star Trek Generations playing on Mr. iMac with the commentary on. Generations being written of course by Brannon Braga and Ron D. Moore. Moore went on to write and run the amazing revamp of Battlestar Galactica, while Braga went on to co-create and run the Lost in Space bore-fest Star Trek Voyager. Two things become very evident with this commentary: 1. Branna Braga was probably the biggest proponet of the Voyager "reset" button, claiming that you can't shake up the status quo on a television show or else the audience will be lost. Moore, who would later make the term "status quo" forbidden on BSG is pretty quiet after this statement, which is probably the most polite thing he could think of doing. 2. The key plot points of BSG were in Moore's head for years, and if he couldn't make them work while Berman and Piller were in charge of TNG, he would get to them eventually. It seems that Moore and Braga were approached in the 6th season of The Next Generation to begin working the 7th Trek feature. Standard logic dictates: new movie, new uniforms, new Enterprise, and it seems Moore wanted to set those gears in motion with a proposed 6th season finale involving the decommissiong of the Enterprise-D. He wanted the ship to be en route to Starfleet where it would be decommissioned and turned into a museum, with the crew scattered (BSG pilot mini-series anyone?). Moore's pitch for the season six cliffhanger also included plans to crash the saucer section of the Enterprise D on an alien world and strand the crew, perhaps accompanied with an enemy. Michael Piller didn't buy the idea (and the television effects of 1993 would be hard-pressed to make it a reality), and the series went with the somewhat weak Hugh/Lore/Borg opus "Descent." During rewrites of Generations, when the Enterprise-D saucer does indeed crash, Moore revisited his idea of stranded Starfleet officers, this time trapping them with a renegade Klingon crew lead by the Duras sisters. Since the death or Kirk was trying to defy expectations (i.e. becoming lame with him falling off a bridge), it became clear that the crash would need to become the big bang finale set-piece, and not a set-up for planetary strife. Interesting how now we have a decommissioned museum ship flying around space and few thousand of humanity's survivors existing on New Caprica with their enemy keeping them reluctant company. Damn interesting. Comments Verrrrry interesting stuff, laddie buck. I don't pay enough attention to the fine print. Me loves some BSG though. I am completely at a loss over the Season 2 hanger. Just... agog. Posted by: mischiff at March 28, 2006 9:31 PM FYI, as much as I loathed (LOATHED) the lameness of Kirk's death in Generations, the novelization version is much tighter and less cheesy. They didn't cut the Kirk death speech and it has more impact. The book has a couple of of really fun additions - Kirk's funeral in the past is a treat as are paragraphs dedicated to some of the series supporting characters (ie. Wesley and the Traveler discussing the Nexus' effects, etc.) As book adaptations of Star Trek movies go, this was one of my favorites. Who's the nerd now? Posted by: Kyle Curry at March 29, 2006 7:42 PM I wanted to start out by saying I love this website! I don't know how you keep up on so much news, but the Star Trek world sure could use a pal like you. Re Moore and BSG, I really wish they had listened to him instead of lame brain Rick Berman. Braga had his good moments and bad moments in trek so I don't really hate him, but Berman is someone that should have NEVER been involved in trek. I just don't get his way of thinking at all. Makes me think he was never a fan of the show, which is even more testimant to why he shouldn't have been the main man. Moore has done such an exceptional job on BSG. Every show leaves me dying for more. Trek used to be this way! Voyager sucked as previously mentioned, DS9 was fabulous, and Enterprise was a testimate to Bermans lack of understanding of trekdom. The fact that BSG is this damn good just during the first two years is a testimate to his skill. Most shows are ok and get really good after the 3rd or 4th year. I don't know what in the heck their going to do during season 3, but I sure as heck know October can't come soon enough. Posted by: James Lytle at April 12, 2006 3:50 PM I love your blog. KarlaX Posted by: KarlaX at April 26, 2006 12:22 AM Love cannot be forced... 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March 27, 2006

[the great big Trek to Galactica] 11:49 PM

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